Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Elevator Pitch. No. 2

From the feedback I received last time, I learned that my pitch needed to sell my product more.  I also learned that it needed to be longer.  No feedback surprised me, and I respected all of my peers opinions, and did not find anything silly.

I changed the length, and delivery of my pitch.  I also changed the contact to match my altered product idea, and believe I did a better job of selling it to customers.


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  1. Alyssa FreebergFebruary 17, 2016 at 6:48 PM

    I really like your new elevator pitch. It is great to see that you read the feedback you got and changed your pitch for this time. It is great to see hardwork and dedication and a cool idea! Good job.

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  2. UnknownFebruary 23, 2016 at 4:41 PM

    Hey I think this is a good idea because headphones are really cheap and profits can be made by selling them for a couple bucks more. I remember an airplane I went on used this idea to watch movies and many people bought it.

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  3. UnknownFebruary 25, 2016 at 2:13 PM

    I like your idea it is pretty cool. You can buy earbuds on planes for two dollars I don't see why this would not work. I personally have forgotten my headphones when going to work out a few times so this would benefit me greatly. Check out my elevator pitch here maybe I could get some of your headphones in my gym. http://gainerent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/the-feedback-i-got-was-to-be-little.html

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  4. UnknownFebruary 25, 2016 at 8:27 PM

    Hey, thanks for sharing your idea with us! I liked it and enjoyed watching your pitch a whole lot. I lose my headphones a whole lot, especially while travelling, so I think I could use your idea a lot also. I also did some work trying to find my demographic, which you can check out here at my elevator pitch http://jlopez3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-reading-reflection.html. Thanks again!

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