Elevator Pitch #4

After my 3^rd elevator pitch, all the feedback I received was positive and did not really get any on what I need to change.  I believe that I have perfected my elevator pitch as much as I can based on the feedback I have received, so this recording of it only has some minor tweaks but is basically the same.

In case you were wondering what has been changed since my first pitch, and I am most certainly sure you are, below I have restated the changed I have made throughout my journey of bettering my elevator pitch.

"From the feedback I received, I learned that my pitch needed to sell my product more.  I also learned I needed to sell the product more, and talk about it more in detail.  No feedback surprised me, and I respected all of my peers opinions, and did not find anything silly.

I changed the length, and delivery of my pitch. I also discussed my product more, and really got into the pitch this time.  I also changed the contact to match my altered product idea, and believe I did a better job of selling it to customers."

In case the video in the play box does not work here is a link to it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1iaP02j0jRM