I changed the length, and delivery of my pitch. I also discussed my product more, and really got into the pitch this time. I also changed the contact to match my altered product idea, and believe I did a better job of selling it to customers.
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch 3
From the feedback I received last time, I learned that my pitch needed to sell my product more. I also learned I needed to sell the product more, and talk about it more in detail. No feedback surprised me, and I respected all of my peers opinions, and did not find anything silly.
I changed the length, and delivery of my pitch. I also discussed my product more, and really got into the pitch this time. I also changed the contact to match my altered product idea, and believe I did a better job of selling it to customers.
I changed the length, and delivery of my pitch. I also discussed my product more, and really got into the pitch this time. I also changed the contact to match my altered product idea, and believe I did a better job of selling it to customers.
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Zach,
ReplyDeleteI first would like to compliment your open-mindedness and ability to accept and adapt to criticism. I went back and watched your 2nd elevator pitch and can see where the corrections took place. You definitely have more energy and sold the product more to your audience. I'm glad to see your improvement and wish you the best with your business.
I have attached the link to my pitch as well and would appreciate any input or advice you have.
http://dipaoloent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Best,
Louis DiPaolo Jr
Hello Zach,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your improvement and your pitch. The advice I would give you is to stand up, dress professionally, and maybe talk more enthusiastic and slower. I'm having trouble following because of this! I also think maybe ending on a better note. Other than that, I think your idea would generate revenue and be a solution to a problem most people don't talk about.
If you would like, you can check out my blog at: http://stthach.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Zach,
ReplyDeleteIt looked like you improved your pitch a lot! I think this one was good and you did explain your product very well. I think you were energetic and engaged in the product you are trying to sell!
Check mine out at:
http://ericanudelman.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Best,
Erica